Wednesday, February 16, 2011

Blogs that I think are "G"

   Amani
I really like how amani does all her blog posts in detail. I could tell that she works hard while writing her blogposts, cause they are very detailed. And she gives strong opinion about what she's writing about. For example. Her poem called "Lina" she clearly stated what she hated about how people look at her sister and automatocally judge. But then she stated what she loves about her sister. and it's really sweet. she elaborates alot also

Serina
What I like about Serinas blog is that she elaborates on her blog. I can tell that she does deep thinking while writing her bloposts. And shes very creative while writing her blogposts. It's cool in her "Rhyming Poem" how even though there is a poem there is another poem going on it it. Which makes it really creative. I can hear a lot of her voice in her blog posts which are really creative.

Isabella
What I like about Isabellas is that she gives what she truly feels in her blogposts. I can tell she deeply thinks about what shes saying "typing". But one thing she could try to improve is to make her blogposts a little longer. And try to ellaborate more. She does a good job. But she doesnt stretch out what she feels.