In the book Speak by Laurie Hale Anderson, showed Melinda's coming of age by representing it with a tree. In the book Melinda was in an art class. They had an assignment where they picked a random item out of a globe and had to work on it for the entire year. Melinda picked a a tree. The tree represents Melinda's coming of age because she had , Stump Stages, Log Stages, and Full Grown Tree.
In the beginning Melinda didn't know how to draw a tree, she didn't know what to do. She didn't want to draw a tree. Those were her "Stump Stages". Basically saying that she was at the beginning of her coming of age. Those were the stages when she didn't want to talk, she wasn't sure of herself. She didn't care. That was the time that she didn't want to tell anyone she was raped. She never spoke up for herself just waited for someone to speak up for her. She wanted to keep it a a secret. An example in the book that show she was in her stump stages was when the art teacher gave her tree, she just said " I learned how to draw a tree in 2nd grade". Melinda never really understood the meaning of the assignment.
In the middle of the book were Melinda's "Log Stages", where she was starting to get to know how to draw the tree, she was starting to get the idea of what the assignment meant. An example that showed me she understood it was, Melinda found a abandoned old janitors closet, and used that as an own personal room, where she worked on her trees and hung up the ones she did bad at and the trees that looked amazing. The log stages was when Melinda started talking, and she even got a friend named David , who helped her stand up for herself to her evil social studies teacher Mr. Neck. It was the stages where Melinda was about to start talking. and when she was hesitating to tell someone she was raped. But she didn't.
In the end of the book Melinda was a " Full Grown Tree" this was when Melinda understood what the assignment meant, and knew what to do. The assignment meant you need to discover yourself in the object. Melinda's old friend Ivy got a clown and she was afraid of clowns, and her doing clown just took the fear out of her. As a a full grown tree Melinda spoke up for herself. She had a friend named Heather in the beginning of the year and she ditched her in the middle of the year, and Heather came crawling back to Melinda for help. She expected Melinda to say yes, but Melinda stood up for herself and said, "No". And this was the stage where she spoke up to tell Rachel aka. " Rachelle" that she was raped by Andy Evans.
In conclusion, the tree represented Melinda's coming of age. Melinda had her stump stages, log stages, and full grown tree. Each stages showed how Melinda grew up. From being someone quiet to someone not that afraid to talk. The book shows great ways to represent coming of age, cause you saw how Melinda cam of age.
Tuesday, June 7, 2011
Tuesday, May 24, 2011
Reading Response Essay to Speak
Being raped by someone changes your life, you feel like an outcast and you feel like you can't speak up. Rape does something to a a person that changes them emotionally. You also can loose all your friends. That's what happened to Melinda in "Speak" by Laurie Halse Anderson.
One thing that rape does to you is make you loose your friends. The way that Melinda lost all her friends was after she was raped she called the cops, she was terrified and didn't know what to do. Her friends didn't talk to her at all because everyone hated Melinda because some kids got arrested at the party. And her friends didn't want to be hated so they stopped talking to Melinda. Her friend didn't know that Melinda got raped, she never told anyone she was too afraid of what people would think. Not even she knew why she didn't say anything. That's basically 3/4 of the reason she had no friends.
Another thing that rape does to you is it makes you feel like an outcast.The definition of Outcast is " a person who is rejected or cast out as from home or society . That's exactly how she felt and how she acted, like an Outcast. She just felt as if the world was against her. She felt like no one want to be with her or cares about her. For example, in the beginning of the school year she had one friend named Heather but then Heather ditched Melinda to hang out with these total plastic snobs who think they're good. Just because she feel like Melinda was basically going through a " Life Sucks Phase". Which made things much more bad for Melinda because it made her feel like an outcast even more than she thought she already was.
Another thing that rape does to a person is the person loses their voice and can't speak up. Before Melinda was raped she would do fun things and act crazy and speak up. But after she got raped by Andy Evans that changed her, she just feel useless and she could easily be taken advantage of. When she was being raped she felt like no one heard her so she felt like she had no voice. She just became permanently unheard. After she just basically made people talk for her. Like Heather always asked her to do favors and she felt when Melinda said nothing that was a yes. And Melinda did all these crazy things for Heather. But finally Melinda had the guts to tell people that she was raped, and to tell Heather "No".
In conclusion, if you get raped you feel like an outcast and you loose your voice. No one hears you. And you feel useless. Like you have no point being in the world. Rape can also change a person from who they really are to someone that they're
actually not.
Monday, May 23, 2011
Writing Prompt Assignment #2
Question # 14 What are some questions and concerns you have about growing up and adulthood?
Poem
Will I /Will Someone
Will I have a big house
Will someone be able to feed me
Will I be able to chase the ice-cream truck with my mommy
Will I someone hold my hand when crossing big streets
Will someone be waking me up with song
Will someone be choosing my clothes out and ironing them
Will someone be braiding my hair on weekends
Will someone be giving be giving me hot chocolate in bed
Will someone be putting me in the corner when I behave bad
Will someone make me a snack after school
Will someone tuck me in
Will someone be there when I have bad dreams and to comfort me
Will someone take me and my siblings to the park every weekend to play
Will someone be kissing me goodbye when I go to school
Will someone be there to buy me all the bratz dolls in the world
Will someone be helping me clean my room on saturdays
Will someone be there to help me play on the computer
Will someone be there to tell me no more tv time for bed
I'm afraid of growing up beacause all those "Wills" is my
mommy and I know she won't be there every time I need her.
Poem
Will I /Will Someone
Will I have a big house
Will someone be able to feed me
Will I be able to chase the ice-cream truck with my mommy
Will I someone hold my hand when crossing big streets
Will someone be waking me up with song
Will someone be choosing my clothes out and ironing them
Will someone be braiding my hair on weekends
Will someone be giving be giving me hot chocolate in bed
Will someone be putting me in the corner when I behave bad
Will someone make me a snack after school
Will someone tuck me in
Will someone be there when I have bad dreams and to comfort me
Will someone take me and my siblings to the park every weekend to play
Will someone be kissing me goodbye when I go to school
Will someone be there to buy me all the bratz dolls in the world
Will someone be helping me clean my room on saturdays
Will someone be there to help me play on the computer
Will someone be there to tell me no more tv time for bed
I'm afraid of growing up beacause all those "Wills" is my
mommy and I know she won't be there every time I need her.
Sunday, May 15, 2011
Writing Prompt Assignment #1
Question:
What memorable texts (picture books, poems, oral stories, films, etc.) have influenced your definition of growing up?
I have to say a lot of disney movies have influenced my growing up. That was mostly all I watched. and what just forms your child into the personality they have today. The movies give you a sense of action like watching "Peter Pan" for days kids were probably trying to fly. Or with movies like "Toy Story" I bet every single child in America checked to see if there Toys were playing around when they were slepping. The movies give you imagination, and a reason to believe in fictional and fantasy things. Even the songs sang in the movies kept parents agrivated by there kids repeating the song over and over again. After seeing the "Lion King" all I ever wanted to do was to put a catr in the air and sing the "Circle of Life" . After seeing "George of the Jungle" all I wanted to do was swing on wines and rip my shirt of and scream oooooooohhhhhhohohohohohoh. Those movies influneced me to have a great imagination today which is awesome because it just gave me a creative mind. What I can't wait is to be King. And seeing all the princesses made little girls feel like princesses themselves and just made them feel beautiful.
Some of all my Favorite Disney movies are ;
- Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs
- Pinnochio
- Cinderella
- Peter Pan
- Sleeping Beauty
- 101 dalamtions
- The Jungle Book, The Little Mermaid, Beauty and teh Beast, Aladdin, The Lion King,2, 1 and a half, Pocahantas, Toy Story 1,2,3 , Hunchback of Notre Dame, Hercules, George of the Jungle, Mulan, A Bugs Life, Tarzan, 102 dalmations, The Emperors New Groove, Recess: Schools Out, The Princess Diaries, Monsters Inc., Lilo & Stitch, The Santa Clause 1,2, Holes, Finding Nemo, etc. etc. etc.
Tuesday, April 26, 2011
Final Final Actual Reading Response
The book I chose to read was "The Secret Identity of Devon Delaney". What I'm going to be focusing on in this Reading Response is how a small lie can turn into multiple lies. The book is about how a girl thought one harmless lie would go away. But it didn’t. Thesis: How a small lie can turn into many more lies and the effect of lying.
You shouldn't lie, because you'll always suffer consequences. It's because when Devon lied to her friend Lexi about how she is popular at her school, even though people barely know her. She told her that she was going out with Jared Bentley because he's the popular boy in school. He doesn't even know she exists. She also told Lexi that she hangs out with the popular kids at school, but they didn't know she existed. Devon thought that she would probably never see Lexi again so that's why she told her all those lies. But then on the first day of school Devon luck ran out because Lexi showed up. What she could have done was tell her the truth from the beginning but she didn't know how, because she was afraid that Lexi wouldn't want to talk to her at all. But if Devon just told the truth from the beginning then maybe she wouldn't be stressed out, because after a while she lost track of all of the lies she told.
Throughout the whole book Devon kept telling lies, for example when Devon got grounded her mom said she couldn't go anywhere for a 2 weeks. But Devon lied to her mom saying that she was making up a test but Devon actually went to the mall with Lexi to go shopping. Devon thought her mom wouldn't know, but eventually her mom found the receipt on the floor, and looked at the date. This basically got her grounded for an even longer time. This is what lying does to you, if you start lying then you just keep doing it and doing it and you can't control it. Devon lied about a lot of stuff during the book.
The text relates to the real-world because when you say a small lie, and you don't want to say the truth, your just going to have to make up more &more lies. Like one time I lied to my mom about what happened to my metro-card and I kept telling her lies and then I lost track of them and I told her the truth that my metro-card fell out of a book. One small lie can lead to 50 other lies. I think that before you lie about something you should think about it. And if you end up in Devon's situation just stop when you realize you might get caught. Also if you keep telling lies then after a while you'll start losing the trust of people who trusted you.
You shouldn't lie, because you'll always suffer consequences. It's because when Devon lied to her friend Lexi about how she is popular at her school, even though people barely know her. She told her that she was going out with Jared Bentley because he's the popular boy in school. He doesn't even know she exists. She also told Lexi that she hangs out with the popular kids at school, but they didn't know she existed. Devon thought that she would probably never see Lexi again so that's why she told her all those lies. But then on the first day of school Devon luck ran out because Lexi showed up. What she could have done was tell her the truth from the beginning but she didn't know how, because she was afraid that Lexi wouldn't want to talk to her at all. But if Devon just told the truth from the beginning then maybe she wouldn't be stressed out, because after a while she lost track of all of the lies she told.
Throughout the whole book Devon kept telling lies, for example when Devon got grounded her mom said she couldn't go anywhere for a 2 weeks. But Devon lied to her mom saying that she was making up a test but Devon actually went to the mall with Lexi to go shopping. Devon thought her mom wouldn't know, but eventually her mom found the receipt on the floor, and looked at the date. This basically got her grounded for an even longer time. This is what lying does to you, if you start lying then you just keep doing it and doing it and you can't control it. Devon lied about a lot of stuff during the book.
The text relates to the real-world because when you say a small lie, and you don't want to say the truth, your just going to have to make up more &more lies. Like one time I lied to my mom about what happened to my metro-card and I kept telling her lies and then I lost track of them and I told her the truth that my metro-card fell out of a book. One small lie can lead to 50 other lies. I think that before you lie about something you should think about it. And if you end up in Devon's situation just stop when you realize you might get caught. Also if you keep telling lies then after a while you'll start losing the trust of people who trusted you.
Thursday, March 31, 2011
Final Draft to Reading Response
The book I chose to read was "The Secret Identity of Devon Delaney". What I'm gonna be focusing on in this Reading Response is how a small lie can turn into multiple lies. The book is about how a girl thought one harmless lie would go away. But it didn't.Thesis : How one small lie can turn into many more lies.
One observation i learned was that you shouldn't lie. Because you'll always suffer consequences. It's because when Devon lied to her friend Lexi about how she is popular at her school, even though people barely know her at school. She told her that she was going out with Jared Bentley because hes the popular boy in school. And he doesn't even know she exist. She also told Lexi that she hangs out with the popular kids at school, but they didn't know she existed.Devon thought that she would probably never see Lexi again so that's why she told her all those lies. But then on the first day of school Devon was tight because Lexi showed up. What she could have done was tell her the truth from the beginning but she didn't know how.
Another observation i saw is that only saying sorry would let people for forgive you. You have to prove to them that you actually mean it when you say sorry. In the book Devon said sorry to Lexi and to everyone she hurted and expected to be forgiven. But she realized that she actually had to do something. Like when Lexi forgave her she told Jared to ask out Lexi , and that proved to Lexi that maybe Devon was sorry.
The text relates to the real-world because when you say a small lie, and you don't want to say the truth, your just gonna have to make up more &more lies.One small lie can lead to 50 other lies. I think that before you lie about something you should think about it. And if you end up in Devon's situation just stop when you realize you might get caught.
One observation i learned was that you shouldn't lie. Because you'll always suffer consequences. It's because when Devon lied to her friend Lexi about how she is popular at her school, even though people barely know her at school. She told her that she was going out with Jared Bentley because hes the popular boy in school. And he doesn't even know she exist. She also told Lexi that she hangs out with the popular kids at school, but they didn't know she existed.Devon thought that she would probably never see Lexi again so that's why she told her all those lies. But then on the first day of school Devon was tight because Lexi showed up. What she could have done was tell her the truth from the beginning but she didn't know how.
Another observation i saw is that only saying sorry would let people for forgive you. You have to prove to them that you actually mean it when you say sorry. In the book Devon said sorry to Lexi and to everyone she hurted and expected to be forgiven. But she realized that she actually had to do something. Like when Lexi forgave her she told Jared to ask out Lexi , and that proved to Lexi that maybe Devon was sorry.
The text relates to the real-world because when you say a small lie, and you don't want to say the truth, your just gonna have to make up more &more lies.One small lie can lead to 50 other lies. I think that before you lie about something you should think about it. And if you end up in Devon's situation just stop when you realize you might get caught.
Sunday, March 27, 2011
Shakespeare EXTRA CREDIT: Romeo and Juliet
I watched the 1968 version of Romeo and Juliet. Directed by: Franco Zeffirelli. Starring Leonard Whiting as Romeo and , Olivia Hussey. It's a British-Italian cinematic adaptation of the William Shakespeare play.
Romeo and Juliet are about two families in Verona, Capulet’s and Montague’s have been having a feud for a couple of years. Then one day the Capulet’s are throwing a party and Romeo from the Montague's and a couple of friends decide to crash the party. And at the party Romeo meets the love of his life Juliet, then he falls in love with her and after a few words of talking Juliet falls in love with him also. They get secretly married by Romeo's father figure Friar Lawrence, with Juliet's mother figure the Nurse. Then one day a duel breaks out between Juliet's cousin Tybalt and Mercutio. Mercutio ends up losing and dies. Then Romeo got upset and killed Tybalt. And Romeo's punishment by the Prince of Verona is that Romeo is banished from Verona. Then since Juliet's father Capulet didn't know about Romeo and Juliet's secret marriage he arranged her to marry Count Paris. In order for Juliet not to marry Paris and to stay faithful to Romeo Friar Lawrence made her a poison which made her dead for a couple of hours. Friar Lawrence plans to inform Romeo of the plan so that he can pick Juliet up after her burial and escape with her when she recovers from the poison, but the news of Juliet's death reaches Romeo before the Friar's letter. In sadness Romeo drinks a poison and kills himself by Juliet’s side in her tomb. Afterwards Juliet wakes up a little while after Romeo kills himself and stabs herself with Romeo’s dagger. After both families find them dead they settle their feud.
The things I liked about the movie were the good actor's. You could tell that Romeo and Juliet were in love. But were afraid of loving each other. Like during the Balcony scene Juliet seemed a bit nervous but Romeo didn’t care he wanted Juliet. You can also tell how strongly Capulet’s and Montague’s didn't like each other. I thought the character that played Tybalt Michael York did an amazing job showing that he didn't like Montague's like at the Capulet's party and Tybalt saw Romeo and he was getting really pissed off about seeing Romeo there, and he really wanted him out of the party.
One of the things I payed attention to in the movie was how the play was different from the movie. I followed along ehile watching.The movie was different from the book in a couple of ways; they didn't show that much stuff that the actual play had. They switched a lot of stuff around in the play and in the movie. Some examples; immediately following the fight between Romeo and Tybalt (and Romeo's quick exit), both house lords and ladies and the Prince arrive on the fight scene. But in the movie after that scene is Juliet and the Nurse's grieving, the scene is instead shifted to the steps of the prince's palace. Another example is when Juliet's arranged marriage to Count Paris is scheduled for a Thursday, but after Juliet's "repentance", an overjoyed Lord Capulet moves the wedding day up to Wednesday. In the movie the day doesn’t change. Another example is when Juliet has a lengthy speech, before drinking the sleeping potion. But in the movie Juliet has one line that says ,"Love give me strength" before drinking the potion. Another example is in the play Friar John cannot get Friar Lawrence's message to Romeo because he finds himself thwarted by quarantine, in the movie and instead returns the letter to Friar Laurence. Balthasar, galloping on horseback to tell Romeo of Juliet's "death", passes the unhurried messenger on the road. Later on, as Romeo and Balthasar ride back to Verona, they pass by the messenger, who is fixing the cargo on his donkey. Also they don’t give Friar John a name in the movie. And he has no line.
Another one is in the play after hearing of Juliet's "death", Romeo buys a vial of poison from a apothecary before riding back to Verona. But in the movie the scene was eliminated and was replaced by Balthasar and Romeo riding to Capulet’s' tomb; though it is daylight as they ride back to Verona, its night when they arrive. Where Romeo got the poison from isn’t clear in the movie. Another example is at the entrance to Capulet's tomb following Juliet's funeral ceremony, Romeo is intercepted by Count Paris, who tries to arrest the Romeo, but Romeo draws on Paris and kills him. But in the movie the scene didn’t even exist. Another example is near the end, following Romeo's and Juliet's suicides, Friar Lawrence was arrested and brought back to the tomb by the Prince's Watchmen, and then he reveals to the Prince, both Lords and Lady Capulet the truth of Romeo and Juliet's clandestine wedding and his other plans. The Friar is not seen or heard from again after fleeing in terror from the tomb, and the news of the secret marriage is never shown in the film, though both houses automatically know about Romeo and Juliet's marriage by the time of the double funeral.
Romeo and Juliet are about two families in Verona, Capulet’s and Montague’s have been having a feud for a couple of years. Then one day the Capulet’s are throwing a party and Romeo from the Montague's and a couple of friends decide to crash the party. And at the party Romeo meets the love of his life Juliet, then he falls in love with her and after a few words of talking Juliet falls in love with him also. They get secretly married by Romeo's father figure Friar Lawrence, with Juliet's mother figure the Nurse. Then one day a duel breaks out between Juliet's cousin Tybalt and Mercutio. Mercutio ends up losing and dies. Then Romeo got upset and killed Tybalt. And Romeo's punishment by the Prince of Verona is that Romeo is banished from Verona. Then since Juliet's father Capulet didn't know about Romeo and Juliet's secret marriage he arranged her to marry Count Paris. In order for Juliet not to marry Paris and to stay faithful to Romeo Friar Lawrence made her a poison which made her dead for a couple of hours. Friar Lawrence plans to inform Romeo of the plan so that he can pick Juliet up after her burial and escape with her when she recovers from the poison, but the news of Juliet's death reaches Romeo before the Friar's letter. In sadness Romeo drinks a poison and kills himself by Juliet’s side in her tomb. Afterwards Juliet wakes up a little while after Romeo kills himself and stabs herself with Romeo’s dagger. After both families find them dead they settle their feud.
The things I liked about the movie were the good actor's. You could tell that Romeo and Juliet were in love. But were afraid of loving each other. Like during the Balcony scene Juliet seemed a bit nervous but Romeo didn’t care he wanted Juliet. You can also tell how strongly Capulet’s and Montague’s didn't like each other. I thought the character that played Tybalt Michael York did an amazing job showing that he didn't like Montague's like at the Capulet's party and Tybalt saw Romeo and he was getting really pissed off about seeing Romeo there, and he really wanted him out of the party.
One of the things I payed attention to in the movie was how the play was different from the movie. I followed along ehile watching.The movie was different from the book in a couple of ways; they didn't show that much stuff that the actual play had. They switched a lot of stuff around in the play and in the movie. Some examples; immediately following the fight between Romeo and Tybalt (and Romeo's quick exit), both house lords and ladies and the Prince arrive on the fight scene. But in the movie after that scene is Juliet and the Nurse's grieving, the scene is instead shifted to the steps of the prince's palace. Another example is when Juliet's arranged marriage to Count Paris is scheduled for a Thursday, but after Juliet's "repentance", an overjoyed Lord Capulet moves the wedding day up to Wednesday. In the movie the day doesn’t change. Another example is when Juliet has a lengthy speech, before drinking the sleeping potion. But in the movie Juliet has one line that says ,"Love give me strength" before drinking the potion. Another example is in the play Friar John cannot get Friar Lawrence's message to Romeo because he finds himself thwarted by quarantine, in the movie and instead returns the letter to Friar Laurence. Balthasar, galloping on horseback to tell Romeo of Juliet's "death", passes the unhurried messenger on the road. Later on, as Romeo and Balthasar ride back to Verona, they pass by the messenger, who is fixing the cargo on his donkey. Also they don’t give Friar John a name in the movie. And he has no line.
Another one is in the play after hearing of Juliet's "death", Romeo buys a vial of poison from a apothecary before riding back to Verona. But in the movie the scene was eliminated and was replaced by Balthasar and Romeo riding to Capulet’s' tomb; though it is daylight as they ride back to Verona, its night when they arrive. Where Romeo got the poison from isn’t clear in the movie. Another example is at the entrance to Capulet's tomb following Juliet's funeral ceremony, Romeo is intercepted by Count Paris, who tries to arrest the Romeo, but Romeo draws on Paris and kills him. But in the movie the scene didn’t even exist. Another example is near the end, following Romeo's and Juliet's suicides, Friar Lawrence was arrested and brought back to the tomb by the Prince's Watchmen, and then he reveals to the Prince, both Lords and Lady Capulet the truth of Romeo and Juliet's clandestine wedding and his other plans. The Friar is not seen or heard from again after fleeing in terror from the tomb, and the news of the secret marriage is never shown in the film, though both houses automatically know about Romeo and Juliet's marriage by the time of the double funeral.
Another example is in the play in the tomb, we learn through Lord Montague that his wife died of a broken heart upon learning of her son Romeo's banishment. But in the movie Lady Montague is still alive in the final scene at the church. The last example is that the play end’s in the Capulet’s tomb when they realize that their feud has gone on for too long. The final scene (the double funeral) unfolds at the steps to Verona's church. After the Prince’s talk of both families, they exit, without reconciliation by the two fathers. The way they show the families stop fighting is when they go into the church side by side.
the entire movie was great. J
Wednesday, March 23, 2011
Reading Response to a book (Edited Version)
The book I chose to read was "The Secret Identity of Devon Delaney". What I'm gonna be focusing on in this Reading Response is how a small lie can turn into multiple lies. The book is about how a girl thought one harmless lie would go away. But it didn't.
One observation i learned was that you shouldn't lie. Because you'll always suffer consequences. It's because when Devon lied to her friend Lexi about how she is popular at her school, even though peple barely know her at school. She told her that she was going out with Jared Bently because hes the popular boy in school. And he doesn't even know she exist. She also told Lexi that she hangs out with the popular kids at school, but they didnt know she existed.Devon thought that she would probably never see Lexi again so that's why she told her all those lies. But then on the first day of school Devon was tight because Lexi showed up. What she could've done was tell her the truth from the beginning but she didn't know how.
Another observation i saw is that only saying sorry would let people for forgive you. You have to prove to them that you actually mean it when you say sorry. In the book Devon said sorry to Lexi and to everyone she hurted and expected to be forgiven. But she realized that she actually had to do something. Like when Lexi forgave her she told Jared to ask out Lexi , and that proved to Lexi that maybe Devon was sorry.
The text relates to the real-world because when you say a small lie, and you don't want to say the truth, your just gonna have to make up more &more lies.One small lie can lead to 50 other lies. I think that before you lie about something you should think about it. And if you end up in Devon's situation just stop when you realize you might get caught
One observation i learned was that you shouldn't lie. Because you'll always suffer consequences. It's because when Devon lied to her friend Lexi about how she is popular at her school, even though peple barely know her at school. She told her that she was going out with Jared Bently because hes the popular boy in school. And he doesn't even know she exist. She also told Lexi that she hangs out with the popular kids at school, but they didnt know she existed.Devon thought that she would probably never see Lexi again so that's why she told her all those lies. But then on the first day of school Devon was tight because Lexi showed up. What she could've done was tell her the truth from the beginning but she didn't know how.
Another observation i saw is that only saying sorry would let people for forgive you. You have to prove to them that you actually mean it when you say sorry. In the book Devon said sorry to Lexi and to everyone she hurted and expected to be forgiven. But she realized that she actually had to do something. Like when Lexi forgave her she told Jared to ask out Lexi , and that proved to Lexi that maybe Devon was sorry.
The text relates to the real-world because when you say a small lie, and you don't want to say the truth, your just gonna have to make up more &more lies.One small lie can lead to 50 other lies. I think that before you lie about something you should think about it. And if you end up in Devon's situation just stop when you realize you might get caught
Wednesday, March 9, 2011
Reading Response to a book
The book I chose to read was "The Secret Identity of Devon Delaney". What I'm gonna be focusing on in this Reading Response is how a small lie can turn into multiple lies. The book is about how a girl thought one harmless lie would go away. But it didn't.
One observation i learned was that you shouldn't lie. Because you'll always suffer consequences. It's because when Devon lied to her friend Lexi about how she is popular at her school, even though peple barely know her at school. She told her that she was going out with Jared Bently because hes the popular boy in school. And he doesn't even know she exist. She also told Lexi that she hangs out with the popular kids at school, but they didnt know she existed.Devon thought that she would probably never see Lexi again so that's why she told her all those lies. But then on the first day of school Devon was tight because Lexi showed up.
Another observation i saw is that only saying sorry would let people for forgive you. You have to prove to them that you actually mean it when you say sorry. In the book Devon said sorry and expected to be forgiven. But she realized that she actually had to do something. Like when Lexi forgave her she told Jared to ask out Lexi , and that proved to Lexi that maybe Devon was sorry.
The text relates to the real-world because when you say a small lie, and you don't want to say the truth, your just gonna have to make up more &more lies.One small lie can lead to 50 other lies. I think that before you lie about something you should think about it.
One observation i learned was that you shouldn't lie. Because you'll always suffer consequences. It's because when Devon lied to her friend Lexi about how she is popular at her school, even though peple barely know her at school. She told her that she was going out with Jared Bently because hes the popular boy in school. And he doesn't even know she exist. She also told Lexi that she hangs out with the popular kids at school, but they didnt know she existed.Devon thought that she would probably never see Lexi again so that's why she told her all those lies. But then on the first day of school Devon was tight because Lexi showed up.
Another observation i saw is that only saying sorry would let people for forgive you. You have to prove to them that you actually mean it when you say sorry. In the book Devon said sorry and expected to be forgiven. But she realized that she actually had to do something. Like when Lexi forgave her she told Jared to ask out Lexi , and that proved to Lexi that maybe Devon was sorry.
The text relates to the real-world because when you say a small lie, and you don't want to say the truth, your just gonna have to make up more &more lies.One small lie can lead to 50 other lies. I think that before you lie about something you should think about it.
Thursday, March 3, 2011
Sonnet : Music
Music makes your day by being sweet Making harmony is what is the best Together making music isn’t cheap You listen to it until your at rest
What makes people happy is the music It turns them on with a sweet melody The dance that in it is very classic Music never turns into a tragedy
Music takes your heart and rips it in half
The melodious sound eats your brains out
The dance moves you do have a big laugh
What is the pain in your heart really about
Music is something your body can control
When you listen to it keep control
Wednesday, February 16, 2011
Blogs that I think are "G"
Amani
I really like how amani does all her blog posts in detail. I could tell that she works hard while writing her blogposts, cause they are very detailed. And she gives strong opinion about what she's writing about. For example. Her poem called "Lina" she clearly stated what she hated about how people look at her sister and automatocally judge. But then she stated what she loves about her sister. and it's really sweet. she elaborates alot also
Serina
What I like about Serinas blog is that she elaborates on her blog. I can tell that she does deep thinking while writing her bloposts. And shes very creative while writing her blogposts. It's cool in her "Rhyming Poem" how even though there is a poem there is another poem going on it it. Which makes it really creative. I can hear a lot of her voice in her blog posts which are really creative.
Isabella
What I like about Isabellas is that she gives what she truly feels in her blogposts. I can tell she deeply thinks about what shes saying "typing". But one thing she could try to improve is to make her blogposts a little longer. And try to ellaborate more. She does a good job. But she doesnt stretch out what she feels.
I really like how amani does all her blog posts in detail. I could tell that she works hard while writing her blogposts, cause they are very detailed. And she gives strong opinion about what she's writing about. For example. Her poem called "Lina" she clearly stated what she hated about how people look at her sister and automatocally judge. But then she stated what she loves about her sister. and it's really sweet. she elaborates alot also
Serina
What I like about Serinas blog is that she elaborates on her blog. I can tell that she does deep thinking while writing her bloposts. And shes very creative while writing her blogposts. It's cool in her "Rhyming Poem" how even though there is a poem there is another poem going on it it. Which makes it really creative. I can hear a lot of her voice in her blog posts which are really creative.
Isabella
What I like about Isabellas is that she gives what she truly feels in her blogposts. I can tell she deeply thinks about what shes saying "typing". But one thing she could try to improve is to make her blogposts a little longer. And try to ellaborate more. She does a good job. But she doesnt stretch out what she feels.
Wednesday, January 26, 2011
Best Found Poem: Martin Luther King: I Have a Dream Speech
I have a dream today
that one day Americans
will live on a lonely island
of poverty
I have a dream
that one day Negroes will
give Americans a bad check
marked as
"Insufficient Funds"
I have a dream that one day
Americans will be guilty of
wrongful deeds.
Let us negroes satisfy
our thirst for freedom by
drinking from the cup of
hatred and bitterness
I have a dream
that one day we will come
to realize that their destiny
is not tied up with our destiny
We can walk alone.
WE SHALL OVERCOME
I have a dream
that one day we will be
satisfied when Americans
come from narrow jail cells.
I have a dream that
Americans will come from the
slums and ghettos of our modern
cities, Let us wallow in the valley
of despair.
I have a dream
that Americans will have
no quest for freedom.
Free at last
Free at last
Thank God Almighty
We are free at least
that one day Americans
will live on a lonely island
of poverty
I have a dream
that one day Negroes will
give Americans a bad check
marked as
"Insufficient Funds"
I have a dream that one day
Americans will be guilty of
wrongful deeds.
Let us negroes satisfy
our thirst for freedom by
drinking from the cup of
hatred and bitterness
I have a dream
that one day we will come
to realize that their destiny
is not tied up with our destiny
We can walk alone.
WE SHALL OVERCOME
I have a dream
that one day we will be
satisfied when Americans
come from narrow jail cells.
I have a dream that
Americans will come from the
slums and ghettos of our modern
cities, Let us wallow in the valley
of despair.
I have a dream
that Americans will have
no quest for freedom.
Free at last
Free at last
Thank God Almighty
We are free at least
Monday, January 24, 2011
Rhymin Poem
Hi, I'm a girl named Holly
She always seemed to be jolly
But one day I was sad
Because I heard somethin bad
The morining I was walking to school
These girls called me un-cool
It's because I'm black
which made me wack
I cried all day
And couldn't make the pain go away
I want to be cool
But I don't want to look like a fool
I went to those girls that same day
But they gave me a look to go away
I went home sad
On my way I saw my dad
WHICH MADE ME GLAD
She always seemed to be jolly
But one day I was sad
Because I heard somethin bad
The morining I was walking to school
These girls called me un-cool
It's because I'm black
which made me wack
I cried all day
And couldn't make the pain go away
I want to be cool
But I don't want to look like a fool
I went to those girls that same day
But they gave me a look to go away
I went home sad
On my way I saw my dad
WHICH MADE ME GLAD
Monday, January 17, 2011
Poem on an Incident
Babies and Fish
How was she supposed to know
that
fish
can't
eat
normal
food.
The baby girl dumped all
diffrent types of food in
the tank.
Like
Chicken
Rice
Cheerios
Bread
Orange Juice
10 minutes later there were no more
FISH
How was she supposed to know
that
fish
can't
eat
normal
food.
The baby girl dumped all
diffrent types of food in
the tank.
Like
Chicken
Rice
Cheerios
Bread
Orange Juice
10 minutes later there were no more
FISH
Thursday, January 13, 2011
Famous Painting Poem
Mona Lisa
She smiles or she Smirks
with a beautiful stare
I wonder beneath her eyes
is their happiness or sorrow
madness or gladness
She seems to be a
very important person
in the small town behind
her
I wonder if she knows
there is wonder behind her
Reading Response to " Photographs of the Girl "
What I thought about this poem is that its rough that this girl is going through puberty while being starved and being thirsty. It stinks because while going through puberty you get hungry and thirsty all the time. And it sucks. I don't know how it feels to feel hungry and thirsty. And thats what is difficult about connecting in the poem
Monday, January 10, 2011
Making Observations and Interpretations of Art Entry Andy Warhol
Observation
The can looks broken up.
Red, Black, White, and Gold at the bottom
You can see the real can under the scraped off paper
Infrences
Maybe when Andy tasted the soup he probably got sick
he's showing what he feels about it. There is definetly something special
about the can cause there are many diffrent companies for soup.
Something happened to him because of the soup can
Interpretation
Maybe Andy Warhol doesnt like Campbells Soup
He though he would share what he feels about it by ripping off the paper thing
Monday, December 13, 2010
First Draft to Author's Note
Child abuse is a really terrible thing that happens to children all around tthe world. It's horrible because kids have side effects to child abuse, which is basically what I'm dedicating to the book. It's just like medicine child abuse has it's side effects.
I got inspired by writing the book because previously i saw a movie dealing with two types of child abuse physical and sexual abuse, and that made me want to start researching this topic. And during this process it made me realize what bad things kids actually have to go through. I also learned the affects of child abuse for physical abuse is if the child has unexplained weird shaped marks on their body, they have fear of adults , and has antisocial behavior. For Emotional abuse Apathy, Depression, Lack of concentration and eating disorders. For Neglect unsuitable clothing for weather, dirty or unbathed, and extreme hunger.
I made this story so you can actually see the signs of child abuse which basically is my moral
I got inspired by writing the book because previously i saw a movie dealing with two types of child abuse physical and sexual abuse, and that made me want to start researching this topic. And during this process it made me realize what bad things kids actually have to go through. I also learned the affects of child abuse for physical abuse is if the child has unexplained weird shaped marks on their body, they have fear of adults , and has antisocial behavior. For Emotional abuse Apathy, Depression, Lack of concentration and eating disorders. For Neglect unsuitable clothing for weather, dirty or unbathed, and extreme hunger.
I made this story so you can actually see the signs of child abuse which basically is my moral
Monday, November 22, 2010
Research Topic # 2 Teenage Pregnancy
The second topic i wanted to dicuss is Teenage Pregnancy. I think that , that's a major issue going on to the country.It's a really difficult thing to deal with especially when you have school , and other plans. The part that is most difficult is telling your parents that you got pregnant. Some teens always try to deny it or ignore with can damage how the baby physically and mentally come out.
Teen pregnancy rates in the United States declined steadily from 1991 to 2005 from 60 out of 1000 teenagers in 1991 to 40.5 out of 1000 in 2005. However, the teen pregnancy rate increased for two years in a row in 2006 and 2007,to more than 42 out of 1000. Approximately one-third of young women in the United States become pregnant during their teens. More than 80% of teen pregnancies are unintended and unintentional. The highest teen birth rate occurs in Hispanic women 83 out of 1000 in 2006.Its really bad thatthe percentage of it, is going up and up each year.
On mtv the have a show called " 16 and Pregnant " It shows 6 girls who are 16 and who are pregnant. It shows all the tough decisions they have to make. One girl ended up not being able what she wanted to because of her pregnancy, they have to deal with all their peers looking at them , saying and thinking mean and rude coments. It sounds easy, but after watching what happened to these girls I realize it's not easy. Some of them were really poor, and couldn't even afford these babies. Here's a trailer http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BLiXS02Mj7U . They can't have fun in their highschool years, because they have a baby to deal with.
The Grandparent(s) end up having to take care of the baby during the day because the want their child to have an education. Some Grandparents have to give up what they have just to take care of the baby. And it'a stressful because the mother and the grandparents have to stop hanging out with their friends, stop going to work because they have to take care of one baby.
Did you know ?
Teen pregnancy rates in the United States declined steadily from 1991 to 2005 from 60 out of 1000 teenagers in 1991 to 40.5 out of 1000 in 2005. However, the teen pregnancy rate increased for two years in a row in 2006 and 2007,to more than 42 out of 1000. Approximately one-third of young women in the United States become pregnant during their teens. More than 80% of teen pregnancies are unintended and unintentional. The highest teen birth rate occurs in Hispanic women 83 out of 1000 in 2006.Its really bad thatthe percentage of it, is going up and up each year.
On mtv the have a show called " 16 and Pregnant " It shows 6 girls who are 16 and who are pregnant. It shows all the tough decisions they have to make. One girl ended up not being able what she wanted to because of her pregnancy, they have to deal with all their peers looking at them , saying and thinking mean and rude coments. It sounds easy, but after watching what happened to these girls I realize it's not easy. Some of them were really poor, and couldn't even afford these babies. Here's a trailer http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BLiXS02Mj7U . They can't have fun in their highschool years, because they have a baby to deal with.
The Grandparent(s) end up having to take care of the baby during the day because the want their child to have an education. Some Grandparents have to give up what they have just to take care of the baby. And it'a stressful because the mother and the grandparents have to stop hanging out with their friends, stop going to work because they have to take care of one baby.
Did you know ?
- 85 percent of teenage pregnancy are unplanned,
- 15 percent of teenage pregnancies are planned
- The reason for lack of prenatal care is delayed by pregnancy testing
- Because the body of a teen is still growing ,she will need more nutritional support to meet both her needs and that of her baby
- It's advised that if you have a teenage pregnanacy that you get counseling
- Lack of the proper amount of nutrition can lead to problems like anemia (low iron), low weight gain, etc.
- A problem is that teen mothers uses drugs, alchohol, and smoking cigarettes which can really damage the baby
- Premature birth create a problem, like brain damage,physical disabilities and more
- Many of the teen mothers who take active roles in their care do go on to have healthy babies
- Sometimes teenage pregnancies bring families together
Wednesday, November 17, 2010
Research Topic # 1
My first Research topic is about child abuse. I started deeply thinking about child abuse when I saw a movie dealing with this serious topic.http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w2edpgb2EKo&feature=related.
The movie is called Bastard out of Carolina . It struck me because there are other girls and boys who have to deal with it. And it's really horrible.
In an article i read it said child abuse isn't just physical violence.http://helpguide.org/mental/child_abuse_physical_emotional_sexual_neglect.htm.
People always think that is just physical, but it's there are many types of child abuse. For ex. when parents "Forget" to feed their child ( Neglect ) that's is a sign of child abuse. When parents say to their child your worthless, you were a mistake that's child abuse, that's emotional child abuse. People always think that abused children always grow up to be abusers. But that isn't true when children grow up they would most definetley avoid being a child abuser. They don't want their child having to grow up like they had to. People also think that child abusers are bad people, that's not true. Because some people have a problem and they're are really good people, but they have a mental problem.
When people abuse their child, they get insecure about themselves. They don't trust people. Growing up with out trust is bad, because when in adult hood their relationship might turn out bad because they had no trust as a child. And they won't be able to trust anyone.
Another way is sexual abuse, the character in Bastard out of Carolina dealt with it. Her stepfather sexual abused her ( but you have to read the book for detail). Some sexual abuse dosen't have to be touching, but exposing a child to sexual situations. It actually scars them for life. It's something they shouldn't feel or see.
The article also mention signs of Emotional Abuse if the child get's scared of doing the wrong thing, or isn't attached to parent(s) as well as they should be.
Signs of Physical Abuse is if the child has weird cuts on body or wearing innapropriate clothing to cover marks like wearing a sweater on 100 degree days or very flichy and afraid of someone touching him or her.
Sign's of Neglectual Abuse is the child's clothes are filthy if their hygiene like unwashed hair or has body odor. Or has Untreated illnesses and physical injuries. And is frequently late or absent from school.
Sign's of Sexual Abuse is having trouble walking or sitting, displays their knowledge of sex. Makes efforts to avoid people, has problem changing clothes in front of parents.Or runaway's from home.
There is also this song called Runaway Love by Ludacris ft. Mary J. Blidge. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ISvMS6s41vY . It deals with all types of child abuse.
My personal opinion is that I hate the fact that boy's and girls have to deal with this. It's horrible that parents think physically discplining kids will teach them to behave , they just grow up in fear of everything and that truly sucks.
The movie is called Bastard out of Carolina . It struck me because there are other girls and boys who have to deal with it. And it's really horrible.
In an article i read it said child abuse isn't just physical violence.http://helpguide.org/mental/child_abuse_physical_emotional_sexual_neglect.htm.
People always think that is just physical, but it's there are many types of child abuse. For ex. when parents "Forget" to feed their child ( Neglect ) that's is a sign of child abuse. When parents say to their child your worthless, you were a mistake that's child abuse, that's emotional child abuse. People always think that abused children always grow up to be abusers. But that isn't true when children grow up they would most definetley avoid being a child abuser. They don't want their child having to grow up like they had to. People also think that child abusers are bad people, that's not true. Because some people have a problem and they're are really good people, but they have a mental problem.
When people abuse their child, they get insecure about themselves. They don't trust people. Growing up with out trust is bad, because when in adult hood their relationship might turn out bad because they had no trust as a child. And they won't be able to trust anyone.
Another way is sexual abuse, the character in Bastard out of Carolina dealt with it. Her stepfather sexual abused her ( but you have to read the book for detail). Some sexual abuse dosen't have to be touching, but exposing a child to sexual situations. It actually scars them for life. It's something they shouldn't feel or see.
The article also mention signs of Emotional Abuse if the child get's scared of doing the wrong thing, or isn't attached to parent(s) as well as they should be.
Signs of Physical Abuse is if the child has weird cuts on body or wearing innapropriate clothing to cover marks like wearing a sweater on 100 degree days or very flichy and afraid of someone touching him or her.
Sign's of Neglectual Abuse is the child's clothes are filthy if their hygiene like unwashed hair or has body odor. Or has Untreated illnesses and physical injuries. And is frequently late or absent from school.
Sign's of Sexual Abuse is having trouble walking or sitting, displays their knowledge of sex. Makes efforts to avoid people, has problem changing clothes in front of parents.Or runaway's from home.
There is also this song called Runaway Love by Ludacris ft. Mary J. Blidge. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ISvMS6s41vY . It deals with all types of child abuse.
My personal opinion is that I hate the fact that boy's and girls have to deal with this. It's horrible that parents think physically discplining kids will teach them to behave , they just grow up in fear of everything and that truly sucks.
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